...just trying posting here for the first time.
I find Eagle´s article interesting, and I'm listening to some of his songs right now (I´m not gonna mention them; no permission.)
Notwithstanding, I agree with John_Marwin's ´bit of critique´, though I have into account this is a for-Newbies-tracking articles.
I've just also listened to a pairof Rikimbo's. And I think Rikimbo's tracking is not bad; if he considers he makes the mistakes listed in the article. Are they mistakes really?
In my opinion, some aspects mentioned in the article like loudness or speed are not ones to be strictly ´arbitrated´by anyone.
I mean, from Eagle's music subjectivity the article is ok. But I would rather specify "This is my opinion" on top of it. Hope I´m being clear.