This tune seems to be a very thoughtful tribute to someone, but it seems to suffer from some panning choices and lo-fi samples. The melody and harmony really seem to work well; but the drums almost seem out of place with everything else. The panning seems to be random; which doesn't do any good for the song. The song also seems to be pretty repeaditive, although the artist seems to be making an effort to vary it up somewhat; I think a twist in the chord progression here or there would really help. Also, I dislike the sudden ending; a song like this should at least fade into nothingness.. Perhaps the ending is intentional, but I'm not sure if it was, or was just a lack of more inspiration. Technically, this tune isn't really spectacular. The tracking seems basic, and the choice of setting each channel to a static panning preset doesn't favor this tune. The samples are all lo-fi, and the loop points aren't chosen well; I feel like more attention here would really help the tune. Overall, it's a nice melody, but it could use more technical attention throughout the tune.

Posted by christofori on Sat 14th Jun 2003, rated 4 / 10.