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Jannerd

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My first one
« on: October 01, 2008, 19:01:58 »
Finally I have something to let other people laugh at. I've been on this one for over a week. :D
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Re: My first one
« Reply #1 on: October 03, 2008, 22:33:49 »
I'm not laughing ;) Quite some potential, good effect usage, rhythm fits to the lead melody. Pretty good song already, although the ending is a little bit abrupt :)
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Re: My first one
« Reply #2 on: October 04, 2008, 19:05:01 »
Yea it wasn't 100% ready yet. But now it is (I think). And here it is:
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Re: My first one
« Reply #3 on: October 04, 2008, 21:55:57 »
Liked it a lot!  Especially the theremin-like effect on track 1 around the middle.  That was great.
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Re: My first one
« Reply #4 on: October 04, 2008, 23:03:08 »
this isn't that bad at all, specially not for a first song. Keep it up ;)
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Re: My first one
« Reply #5 on: October 15, 2008, 23:45:12 »
Nice job  :) I'm working on my first too. Doesn't sound as cool as your thouh :( Got to get the rhythm and timing right.
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Re: My first one
« Reply #6 on: October 31, 2008, 23:22:44 »
I'm not crazy about the arpeggios and the panning went a little overboard at places in the finished version. But nicely varied and long for a firstie. I like your use of different instruments, and the main melody.
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