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[it_is_coming]

This is the first coherent and completely original track I've done. I've done arrangements of other tunes before, so I'm already fairly good with trackers in general. It's very dissonant in some places, I'm a fan of dissonance. I'm looking for criticism on the composition itself. Please be as blunt as possible, if necessary.
http://www.filedropper.com/randomshortthing1

[Diealready]

thats pretty good, just some advice though, you should use more samples to make it sound less "simple", try using some effects, and I noticed you were using the + and - volume slide. use the U(^) and D(V) volume slide for a smoother effect.

8/10

[it_is_coming]

Thanks for the feedback. A question:

when you say "effects", do you just mean using the effects column? I already use it quite a bit.