After a loong break I thought I'd give this one a new chance..
But, again I am disappointed. The start of the song is so atmospheric and bring the original Unreal's musics to my mind that the following leads just don't make it.
The melodies, and overall mix of the leads need alot more work. Currently all the leads are way too loud and all the notes don't "fit" together, breaking the great atmosphere of the backgrounds and drums.
It's still a :thumbneutral:
Wanna know why?
Because this sounds like you had tried to imitate Alexander Brandon and/or Michiel Van Den Bos, but can't just make to their skill level.
I know it's unfair to compare this song (or any other song whatsoever) to Alexander Brandon's Unreal stuff, but I can't help it. It's just way too similar.