I'm listening now. Honestly, I'm not a big trance fan, but I've frankly been pretty impressed by the radio-quality sound people seem to get making these tracks. Yours is very good and wouldn't be out of place on say XM radio's "The System." I like the flutey pad part -- it makes for a nice contrast.
Also, to be fair about modules versus mp3s, modplug, renoise, psycle, etc., all support Vst effects and instruments and I think you can be a tracker without sticking to the old formats. (Of course, what's nice about the old formats is that everyone gets to see and share.) In addition, if you're using commercial samples where one stereo pad could be a megabyte, the mp3 will likely be smaller than the module. (That's why the stuff at my signature link isn't on modarchive.)
There's room for both methods, of course, and there is definitely a feeling of satisfaction to creating a small file size module that sounds good with your own samples, where everyone can see what you've done.
