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DSman59

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DSman59's Metal
« on: May 25, 2009, 15:22:48 »

Hi,
"The Feeling Inside" and "The Blind Follow The Blind" are the first full-length tracks I have ever created. It's metal so not everyone will like it, but feedback is appreciated. :)
Note that these songs will only play properly in NitroTracker. Winamp ignores blank instruments and "--".
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Re: DSman59's Metal
« Reply #1 on: May 25, 2009, 15:24:09 »

Here is the second song.
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« Reply #2 on: May 28, 2009, 01:16:57 »

Will check this out soon and post thoughts.
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« Reply #3 on: May 30, 2009, 02:00:48 »

I like your style (though I hate metal). I think you can do very well, but you should make some more intricate or just better melodies. You should also bring out the instruments you already have (because their samples are very good), because they are being drowned out by the drums. So, you either have to bring the drums down or you need to amplify the strings (guitar/bass). Just a few ideas to make your music better.
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