For Grace (for_grace.xm)
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I am convinced that she doesn't love me, and if she does, she doesn't love me as much as I love her. But, this song was a milestone in my music production, because it was my first Tracker song (That wasn't a remix or a video game loop).
I was embarrassed at school by many people the day after I made this song. They were all like, "Ha ha, Nelson likes Grace!" But that's okay.
This song is the fourth song I have tracked. It may sound a bit horrible. But, the JMOD player is screwing it up, so download it if you want to hear it better.
I will be remaking this song soon, as the reveiws I have received say that I need to revise it a bit. - njaddison
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I'm not sure if the previous commenters were listening to the same tune as I just did, but - to be totally honest - this is a mess. The begining is somewhat decent, but badly instrumented. However, at position 12 (0C), the first unfitting notes start to appear (the saw lead clashes with the minor orchestra hit starting from row 16) and the next order is just a total mess - a completely detuned bass, whose notes also happen to be misplaced by one row - if I was the person this tune is addressed to, I'd probably run away crying tears when hearing this. It was probably not intentional, but next time you should tune your samples and proof-listen the song before uploading it to get rid of such horrible mistakes.
this is cool! it sounds well made and has a catchy beat
I can't help but think of myself when I listen to this song. All the chiptunes I make are because of a girl as well. This song is a lot like the first song I composed a long time ago. Needless to say it is good song, could use some work on the dynamics and the overall "flow" (not so 'choppy').. but besides that not bad at all for an 8th grader. keep it up ;)
Internal Texts *
For Grace
composed by
njaddison
(Nelson Addison)
There's this girl that
I love named Grace.
She's in my math and
English classes.
I hope she likes it...
I'm in the 8th grade
now, about to go to
school.
Sample Author Unknown
Copyright (c) 2012
Nelson Addison. All
Rights Reserved.
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Ouch. I'm pretty sure it's not the mod player, some parts are really broken harmony & structure-wise, so I'd say 4/10 is a fair rating for what it is. :)