pin.xm (pin.xm)

Overall Impression (3/10)

There's quite some extreme sound in here, very dark and laking a proper melody, at least some we can identify with. It repeats quite a bit also, leaving the listener a little bored pretty fast, as fast as the 1minute mark, the song totals 2 min. Some poor selection on the samples and pretty basic drum lines, even if it's fast paced the artist should have taken more attention on the beginning and ending of the song, giving it some meaning. I don't know if this was one of the first attempts at writing tracked music, or something made in a very tight schedule, but it sure seems like it. Everything looks and feels very rushed really hurting the song or message that the artist was trying to pass through, there's some fair building up in the end, but it's not enough to save the song. My advice is to calm down, and try to analyze stuff first, like selection of samples, beginning/middle/end of song and try to listen/see other peoples work and most importantly, vary the patterns at the most, repetition is a easy way to make it, but difficult to be liked by everyone... Keep on tracking and perfect those skills.

Technique, Arrangement, Composition (4/10)

pretty straight forward tracking, poor arrangements although in the end the artist try to build up some tension and lack of composition.

Development (2/10)

there's no melody what so ever, a harsh start and ending, so it bores quite fast with it's repetition...

Creativity (3/10)

There's not a lot of creativity, seems all very rushed thinked and a poor selection of the samples doesn't help

Enjoyment (2/10)

i played more because of the review but, one listen is all it needs...