fish swim lethargically t (fishswim.it)

Overall Impression (6/10)

This song is not meant to be beautiful, but wants you to think about fish. That works and that is funny!

In the light of composition it is mucky.

Technique, Arrangement, Composition (4/10)

No effects used throughout the song. When a volumeslide is used at the end of the patterns it should be way more gradually.

Development (6/10)

It is more 7 patterns and 1 minute and 22 seconds sound than it is a song. No arrangement, no need to mix. Only the use of the samples is allright.

Creativity (6/10)

The idea behind this song is good and funny. The composer tried to make it, but fails in length and originality. The melody is not a real melody and what the lasersound add to an aquarium is indecipherable.

Enjoyment (5/10)

This song is definitely not going into my collection. The whole range of patterns could be used as a theme for a real composition. As long as that is not been done, you should easily leave this song undownloaded and swim towards another sea.

Additional Comment

It is difficult to fully review such a small song with such a big idea. I hope the composer will get into it and make it a great composition!