Well, 'tis a day late but I was busy yesterday. Anyways, I can certainly say that you're improving; there's lots of neat stuff in the song but there still is alot of mixing flaws and sound balance issues. Any kind of trance is quite dependant on the sound so first of all you should get your kick out of the mix. Be it via a fast pitch slide, another kick sample, compressing, anything. This kick's really muddy, has too much bass and way too much frequencies around 250hz - sound pretty much like a drunken version of the earliest Infected Mushroom productions. The speeches are also way too loud considering they've got so much high frequencies. Other than that the mix is decent.
A bit about the melodical side; Very nice acidic synth lines and enough variation in them to keep the song up, but man, CHANGE THAT BEAT EVERY NOW AND THEN!? Gimme a break! Something! Variation!? PLEASE?! *cough*
So yeah, the beat gets really tiresome after 3 minutes. More breaks, more fills, more filtered sweeps, more something, more anything. You know I'm a fan of repetition but this went over the top for me.
Despite my rant, the song is definitely way above the average tracker trance, so good job.
