Ok, I listened, and I really wasn't all that impressed. The way the song progressed really didn't do much for me, and like CK said, some of the samples just sound silly. I do, however, really like how pattern 17 ends.
I'm probably not the right person to review this song, since the whole ambient genre doesn't really interest me.
Jojo, you shouldn't take things the wrong way. If you made absolute crap (not saying you do, by any means) and everyone told you that it was wonderful, you wouldn't improve at all. If anything, just disregard what everyone says and keep setting higher standards for yourself.
